Not your best

I liked some of your other work more. This "series" of work all with the half-ass animation has gotten a little old. Thats just my view though. As long as you keep them funny, I'll keep watching, how bout that?

Needs more time

It would have been a lot better if you had decided to work on it more than four hours.

holy shit on rye!

simply stunning! a breathtaking slew of art and story. the alterations did not stray very far from the base story-line except for the end, which was perfectly rewritten. 5/5 10/10

good stuff

and thanks for giving me credit for EVERYTHING! YAY!

Interesting...

There was the issue of "who woulda thought of that?" in a few places... but otherwise well made. I'm a little thrown off by how the orb transformed into a key, and what that noise was in the beginning.
Good stuff.