Not your best
I liked some of your other work more. This "series" of work all with the half-ass animation has gotten a little old. Thats just my view though. As long as you keep them funny, I'll keep watching, how bout that?
Needs more time
It would have been a lot better if you had decided to work on it more than four hours.
holy shit on rye!
simply stunning! a breathtaking slew of art and story. the alterations did not stray very far from the base story-line except for the end, which was perfectly rewritten. 5/5 10/10
quite well done. the entire movie was beautiful. the characters, and blockhead, were well drawn and animated. the only problem was that you don't know how to blur, so you made an extra layer and alpha'd it to 50%, but it turned out well anyway. by the way, you blur in the filters part next to perimeters. anyway, well done. 5/5, 10/10
loved it, until...
story--work on that.
it had a terrible ending, the shift from serious to "no battery" did not fit the theme, and kind of lost the tempo. i liked the animation and graphics, however a real plot would be nice.
you did a really nice job, yet i do have a small problem-- you did not folow the actual story. MC was in fact a normal kid, just really smart, and his parents were normal people. the human race in fact created the spartans from really intelligent and strong kids that they searched for around the galaxy. during the change from human to spartan, he had an inner struggle to as who he was and finnaly settled on the concept as being the savior of the human race. about 50 other kids died in the shift, as well as 6 some other spartans that survived the transition. the covenant war had been going while he was growing up, in fact, that is the reason they had become spartans. the way that you depicted reach, however, was funny, so i don't mind the shift from what really happened. the chapters lacked what really happened, but the parrody parts where good. i really liked most of it. if you want to know what really happened, read the three books.
??? What the???
This is not a parody. It's a tribute for Denvish's song...
LOL... Besides, i have no idea of what you're on about there... I'm not good at these sorts of things...
But thanks for watching anyway ;)
You'll have to explain it further for me. Here's my addy:
thast pretty fuckin amazing. your my hero. will you marry me?
i liked it. i didnt get the theme until four seconds into it that it all was about STICKS! god, enough sticks have been drawn, make something origional. whatever, what was there was great, so good job, yah.
well, ok. you put work into it, i can tell, but, well, what the fuck? the artwork was such a cliche-- classic anime. and o so random. whatever, its k.
i laffed my ass off whatching that, great job!
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